IELTS writing 2 Simon demo7
in their free time to help the local community.
They believe this would benefit both the individual
teenager and society as a whole.Do you agree or disagree?
Many young people work on a volunteer basis,
and this can only be beneficial for both the
individual and society as a whole. However, I do not
agree that we should therefore force all
teenagers to do unpaid work.
Most young people are already under enough
pressure with their studies, without being given
the added responsibility of working in their spare
time. School is just as demanding as a full-time
job, and teachers expect their students to do
homework and exam revision on top of attending
lessons every day. When young people do have some
free time, we should encourage them to
enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports
and other leisure activities. They have many
years of work ahead of them when they finish their
studies.
At the same time, I do not believe that society has
anything to gain from obliging young people
to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes
against the values of a free and fair society
to force a group of people to do something against
their will. Doing this can only lead to
resentment amongst young people, who would feel
that they were being used, and parents, who
would not want to be told how to raise their children.
Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer,
and this is surely the best system.
In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for
free and help others, but in my opinion we
should not make this compulsory.